Thank you. :) They are just two pieces of my forever-growing epic. There are literally thousands of years and dozens of interwoven stories before and particularly after. The tale of Astraea and Altennimer is among the longest and most important story-threads. It has been on my mind a lot lately and the challenge idea helped me pull this part together in a way that is very fitting.
I will take note of the fact that it was not as clear as it should be. That is a big challenge area for me in part because, aside from the fanfic, I have only been writing for myself so far. I’ll work on it for next time to see if I can do better in that area. I appreciate all feedback very much!
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Date: 2008-11-10 07:29 am (UTC)I will take note of the fact that it was not as clear as it should be. That is a big challenge area for me in part because, aside from the fanfic, I have only been writing for myself so far. I’ll work on it for next time to see if I can do better in that area. I appreciate all feedback very much!