i meantthe crew, notthe ship itself .i meant what it's liek to be on a ship. to sort of knw how they interact etc. and your husband is right .for what it's worhtthey coudl be in a car oen fothem sayign 'e have to go back for that dog' adn it'd still work. and i dind'teven care when it'sset. it's just well. i wnt t owrite liek that when i grow up. I'd liek to have peoel drawn to the chracters adn knowign instantly where the yare and jsut picturingthe thingin their head without me having to do a lot. adn with your stuff teh image doesn't matter so much. i'm hearing the dialogue in m hedaand i'm just paying attention t othe prose. heh. this is one o thoe styels whrey ou jsut need to read the words and real yread the words to gethe story.
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Date: 2007-09-09 06:20 pm (UTC)i wnt t owrite liek that when i grow up. I'd liek to have peoel drawn to the chracters adn knowign instantly where the yare and jsut picturingthe thingin their head without me having to do a lot. adn with your stuff teh image doesn't matter so much. i'm hearing the dialogue in m hedaand i'm just paying attention t othe prose. heh. this is one o thoe styels whrey ou jsut need to read the words and real yread the words to gethe story.