Part two had me grinning ear to ear for the better part of an hour and then my eyes went glassy with aborted tears.
This here, should be a friggin book. FINISH IT! PLEASE! Now I am chomping at the damned bit to know what happens next.
That is why I could just feel the tension in the short peice you wrote. There is a beautiful and terrible tragedy behind them. Love it. You had me at, "I'm being a brat."
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Re: I ran over...sue me.
Date: 2007-09-01 12:26 am (UTC)Part two had me grinning ear to ear for the better part of an hour and then my eyes went glassy with aborted tears.
This here, should be a friggin book. FINISH IT! PLEASE! Now I am chomping at the damned bit to know what happens next.
That is why I could just feel the tension in the short peice you wrote. There is a beautiful and terrible tragedy behind them.
Love it. You had me at, "I'm being a brat."