I love the "It comes down to this" repetition. It's kind of a nice poetic lull and it was the first thing I noticed about this, even more than the story which is both chilling and poetic and pretty. I've never seen the canon, so for me a rewrite of Anthy's story is just as good as an original one and even though it's hard to fill in a lot of blanks in a flash fic, you do give us a lot here.
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Re: is there an award for "most repostings"?
Date: 2005-09-22 06:41 pm (UTC)I love the "It comes down to this" repetition. It's kind of a nice poetic lull and it was the first thing I noticed about this, even more than the story which is both chilling and poetic and pretty. I've never seen the canon, so for me a rewrite of Anthy's story is just as good as an original one and even though it's hard to fill in a lot of blanks in a flash fic, you do give us a lot here.
Thank you. Both for playing and for the story.