Good. I'll list you as my official beta reader, lest anyone give me a hard time about the language. ^_^
Parts 3 and 4 get significantly racier, though. Hmm. Lucius. Leather. Little paper umbrellas, blue drinks, 30-year-old Scotch, mystery potions. Hmm. It has definite potential. It's still my favorite of my stories.
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Re: Go For It!
Date: 2003-09-22 10:38 pm (UTC)Parts 3 and 4 get significantly racier, though. Hmm. Lucius. Leather. Little paper umbrellas, blue drinks, 30-year-old Scotch, mystery potions. Hmm. It has definite potential. It's still my favorite of my stories.