ext_95157 ([identity profile] lostinapapercup.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] in_the_blue 2010-06-01 02:31 am (UTC)

Re: Kate

I'm going to comment on every one of these because you were awesome enough to write something for each character and they're kind of amazing.

Little Kate is a fantastically little no-nonsense opportunist about her New Kids lunchbox. I love that she took both lunchboxes. I love that she thinks Gaius looks "all greasy and stupid," I think Gaius's voice here is pretty impressive, and I love this exchange:

"I don't take advice from strangers."

"Only lunchboxes, I see."


Leaving all of my more general comments here, I'll also say that I love the impressions Six and Gaius leave on each character. This was a delight to read.

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