Part two had me grinning ear to ear for the better part of an hour and then my eyes went glassy with aborted tears.
This here, should be a friggin book. FINISH IT! PLEASE! Now I am chomping at the damned bit to know what happens next.
That is why I could just feel the tension in the short peice you wrote. There is a beautiful and terrible tragedy behind them. Love it. You had me at, "I'm being a brat."
Re: I ran over...sue me.
Part two had me grinning ear to ear for the better part of an hour and then my eyes went glassy with aborted tears.
This here, should be a friggin book. FINISH IT! PLEASE! Now I am chomping at the damned bit to know what happens next.
That is why I could just feel the tension in the short peice you wrote. There is a beautiful and terrible tragedy behind them.
Love it. You had me at, "I'm being a brat."