Ok Part one IS MAGNIFICENT! I am going to do some work here and read part 2 later. It is hard not to jump right in though...You got me. I love there people and their mad dance.
The metaphor is luscious, and has me finding the rhythm in every scene. Wonderful. You pacing is dead on.
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Re: I ran over...sue me.
Date: 2007-08-31 08:07 pm (UTC)The metaphor is luscious, and has me finding the rhythm in every scene. Wonderful. You pacing is dead on.
OH I Damnable work!