http://slaversbane.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] slaversbane.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] in_the_blue 2007-08-31 08:07 pm (UTC)

Re: I ran over...sue me.

Ok Part one IS MAGNIFICENT! I am going to do some work here and read part 2 later. It is hard not to jump right in though...You got me. I love there people and their mad dance.

The metaphor is luscious, and has me finding the rhythm in every scene. Wonderful. You pacing is dead on.

OH I Damnable work!

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