in_the_blue: (what are you?)
g.j. ([personal profile] in_the_blue) wrote2007-06-18 10:35 am

Oh, yay, you're all here!

Summertime haikus

Hector is not here
Away now since last Sunday
It seems he is gone

My daughter's in camp
She will learn to draw and paint
I hope she has fun

The best anime
Cowboy Bebop, from Sunrise
Watch it: it's that good

Sadly, work won't stop
Just because the calendar
Tells us it's summer

Leave me a haiku
5 - 7- 5 syllables
that's the formula

[identity profile] alemara.livejournal.com 2007-06-18 11:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Technically haiku
has to mention a season
in order to count

on the other hand
"hearing a toad croak in spring"
is a little lame

these are kind of, too:
"the red disc of summer sun"
and "autumn leaves fall"

so maybe you do
have the right idea, besides
they are just for fun.
not_that_spike: (on hands and knees)

From your local humble bounty hunter

[personal profile] not_that_spike 2007-06-19 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
Me? Haiku purist?
Rules were made to be broken.
But look, I said "spring."

Re: From your local humble bounty hunter

[identity profile] sff-corgi.livejournal.com 2007-06-20 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
I said 'Hurricane';
I reckoned a kowtow to
Proper form was fair.

But you know me, right?
It's an OCD thingie
Had to make it fit.